Friday 12 March 2010

Comments on thriller opening rough cut

This is the feedback given to us from our class mates and by our media teacher.
  • Good Shot angles
  • We need to make the shots darker
  • POV shot of Heidi running was good but to long
  • Tracking shot of Heidi needs to be more fluid
  • Jump cut between two feet was good
  • Speed up hand held cam of Heidi running
  • Speed up when Heidi waits and views the field
  • Villain in black was good
  • Clear difference between protagonist and antagonist
  • Shot in the bush was good
What we thought of the feedback given to us
  • We agree that Heidi's head cam is to long and we can either speed it up or cut some of it out
  • When Heidi stops at the entrance of the field we are going to speed it up to make it look like it was a quick decision to go into the field
  • When Heidi runs and we are tracking her we need to make it flow nicely with a transition to the head cam shot.

Wednesday 10 March 2010